2/27/08

Benches

They meet on Wednesday nights while their little girls do gymnastics. Checking off the days, they wait impatiently for the hour to arrive. For the other parents, it is an endless hour, on hard wooden benches that smell of feet, but for them it goes too fast. He sits next to her, wedging his body around hers, giving her his full attention. His eyes looking into hers, their legs barely touching getting as close as they can without drawing attention.

This night she came bearing gifts, a small bag with dinner- turkey sandwiches with avocado slices on whole wheat. She packs a bowl full of sugar snap peas hoping he likes them. His eyes go wide as she takes the lid off revealing the vibrant green.
This is the only way they can eat together. The thrill of being in public without being revealed is pure bliss.
It is not yet time to reveal their love for one another, the girls have already been through too much.
They will wait. There will be more months of gymnastics, further time to talk and listen and grow their relationship.

His hand slowly wraps around her small forearm like ivy up a brick wall. She glances around the gym looking for her daughter. Upon finding her she smiled and waves and returns her gaze towards her new found love. This small touch will hold them both over until next week when they will sit together on the hard benches again.

9 comments:

kustuck said...

*sigh* bittersweet, painful, exciting.

Anonymous said...

Wow, Jen. Very Raymond Carver. Love it. Really an amazing moment.

Jennifer said...

oh thank you Scott, you know i love Raymond Carver.

Sara, you should see the couple...very bittersweet, and painful AND exciting.

tania said...

beautifully written, jen. you'd be great at making a collection of short stories!

Dana said...

LOVE IT! It is now my new "girl movie" I will need regular installments for:)

And NICE new layout! I meant to tell you that the other day. Love the pictures you put of you and Hazel too:)

So cute:)

I think you will love my latest entry....

Dana said...

LOVE IT! It is now my new "girl movie" I will need regular installments for:)

And NICE new layout! I meant to tell you that the other day. Love the pictures you put of you and Hazel too:)

So cute:)

I think you will love my latest entry....

rachel said...

beautiful writing. i can visualize it perfectly...

palomarace said...

WOW Jen! beautifully written! Just amazing!

bandwidow said...

I thought of this story the other day, waiting for installment #2...