12/13/09

Snap Shot


We've seen some cold this winter. No snow, but lots and lots of cold. Hazel woke me up this morning with a sense of awe in her voice, "Mama, mama! I want to show you something! You won't believe it!! Hurry!"
I jumped out of bed and threw on the clothes closest to me. Both Hazel and August were standing outside my door waiting. "What's going on?", I asked.
"It's snowing...just barely...but it's SNOWING!", shouted Hazel.
August and I looked at each other with a little bit of disbelief. I was contented to play along, but August is the older brother, and that would have taken too much out of him, so he said, "I looked out the front window and I didn't see anything...I think you're seeing things."
Hazel, the drama queen, looked out the front window and sure enough...no snow flakes...her body was pouting before she hit the couch. Knees up, head down, arms wrapped around her legs.
I gave August "the look" and we went to the kitchen to look out the windows. I called Hazel over to ask if these were the windows she was looking through when she saw the snow. "harmpf, yes...but you won't see any...I SAID it was just BARELY snowing!"
August and I sat at our kitchen table. While I was looking out at the frozen persimmon's hanging from their brittle branches I saw one solitary flake.
"Hazel! I saw one!", I shouted.
Hazel unfolded herself and with a disbelieving smile, slowly approached the window.
August, who was looking out the window facing the bare apple tree now suddenly shouted that he saw one too. Hazel was right. It was barely snowing.
The three of us sat, counting the few flakes, enjoying the cold from our warm kitchen where Trey was fixing eggs for breakfast.

6 comments:

bandwidow said...

Girl! That was so well written! We too were watching the few small flakes fall over here, and now they seem to be falling faster...it'd be nice to have one snow day from school...

Jennifer said...

Thanks AK. We didn't see any more snow today...

tania said...

Looks like the comment I posted yesterday did not go through... Jen, you are such a descriptive writer! I could picture it all so vividly :)

Jennifer said...

Hey Tan, thanks. Nope, no comment from you yesterday...weird!
Hope you had a great birthday!!

palomarace said...

I agree Jen!! You are such a great writer. I felt like I was right there with ya.

Jennifer said...

Thanks Amy. Miss you.